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Topical Discourses of Chibong

Compendium of Remarks on Poetry

Written by , Compiled by Hong Manjong

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Basic Info
Contains	C849, C850, M1037, M1038
Mentions Person	Ŏ Sukkwŏn, 소세양
Mentions Place	의주, 취승정
Book/Volume	Compendium of Remarks on Poetry, Compendium of Remarks on Poetry
Is Part Of	Topical Discourses of Chibong, Autumn
Found Together	E431, E432, E433, E434, E435, E436, E437, E438, E439, E440, E441, E442, E443, E444, E445, E446, E447, E448, E449, E450, E451, E452, E453, E454, E455, E456, E457, E458, E459, E460, E461, E462, E463, E464, E465, E466, E467, E468, E469, E470, E471, E472, E473, E474, E475, E476, E477, E478, E479, E480... further results

Original Text
蘇陽谷。於義州聚勝亭。次暉字韻。得澄江如練謝玄暉。一句而未得其對。學官魚叔權以新月似鎌韓吏部。爲對。一時稱善云。然新月似磨鎌。初非雅語。且其句法。類童穉語。無足道者

Korean Translation

English Translation

At Ŭiju’s Ch’wisŭng Pavilion, So Seyang composed one line to the rhyme “radiance” 暉 (hwi), 澄江如練謝玄暉 “Limpid river like white brocade” said Xie Xuanhui. Then he could not find another line to match it. Then Education Official (hakkwan) Ŏ Sukkwŏn matched it with 新月似鎌韓吏部 “New moon like a sickle” said Minister Han of Civil Service Affairs.And it was regarded as a good poem for a time. However, to begin, “New moon like a sickle” is not an elegant (a) line. Moreover, its composition method (kuppŏp) is similar to a child’s expression. It is not good enough to be mentioned.

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