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Cheho’s Remarks on Poetry

Compendium of Remarks on Poetry

Written by , Compiled by Hong Manjong

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Basic Info
Contains	C1264, C1265, C1266, C1267, M1325, M1326, M1327
Mentions Person	Kwŏn Ŭngin, 양경우, 구양수, 한유, 이달, 최경창, 우곡, 유창, 하이
Mentions Place	함경도
Is Part Of	Cheho’s Remarks on Poetry, Autumn

Original Text
崔學士孤竹以評事赴咸鏡道。蓀谷以塞下曲三首送之。其一首曰。都尉分軍夜斫營。漢家金鼓動邊城。朝來更聽降胡說。西下陰山有伏兵。一時傳詠。余嘗閱唐于鵠詩。有度水逢胡說。沙陰有伏兵之句。權松溪遊海上人家。有鷗飛誤入欄之句。余見何月湖環翠閣詩曰。沙禽占水閑相趁。誤入疏簾靜却廻。昔劉原父戲謂歐陽公曰。永叔於韓文。有公取竊取。公取者粗可數。竊取者無數。蓋松溪約七言兩句。成五言一句。只襲其意。可謂竊取。至如蓀谷。全謄古句。略加數字。要以一時驚人而止。非公取竊取。蓋發塚手也。

Korean Translation

학사 고죽(孤竹) 최경창(崔慶昌)이 평사(評事 북평사(北評事))로 함경도(咸鏡道)에 부임하자 손곡이 〈새하곡(塞下曲)〉 3수로 송별하였다. 그 첫 수에 이르기를, 도위가 군사를 나눠 밤에 적진 습격하니 / 都尉分軍夜斫營 한나라의 쇠북소리 변성을 진동하네 / 漢家金鼓動邊城 아침에 항복한 오랑캐 얘기 들으니 / 朝來更聽降胡說 서쪽 아래 음산에는 복병이 있다네 / 西下陰山有伏兵 하였는데, 한 때에 전하여 읊어졌다. 내가 일찍이 당나라 우곡(于鵠)의 시를 보니, 물 건너 오랑캐 말을 들으니 / 度水逢胡說 사막 북쪽에 복병이 있다네 / 沙陰有伏兵 라는 구절이 있었고, 권송계(權松溪 권응인(權應仁))의 시〈유해상인가(遊海上人家)〉에는, 갈매기가 잘못 난간에 날아드네 / 鷗飛誤入闌 라는 구절이 있었다. 또 나는〈하월호환취각(何月湖環翠閣)〉시에 나오는, 사금이 물을 차지하여 한가히 서로 따르다 / 沙禽占水閑相趁 성긴 발에 잘못 들어갔다 돌아나오네 / 誤入疏簾靜却廻 라는 구절도 보았다. 옛날에 유원보(劉原父)가 구양공(歐陽公 구양수(歐陽脩))을 희롱하며 말하기를, “영숙(永叔 구양수의 자(字))이 한유(韓愈)의 문장에서 공취(公取 공공연히 취함)한 것이 있고 절취(竊取 몰래 취함)한 것이 있는데, 공취한 것은 대강 셀 수 있지만 절취한 것은 셀 수가 없습니다.” 하였는데, 송계는 칠언 두 구절을 요약하여 오언 일구를 이루어 다만 그 뜻만을 취했을 뿐이니 절취라고 이를 만하다. 그러나 손곡은 고구(古句)를 완전히 베껴 거기에 몇 글자만 더해 한때에 사람들을 놀라게 하고자 했으니, 공취와 절취가 아니고 발총수(發塚手 무덤을 파헤친 솜씨)이다.

English Translation

When Academician (haksa) Ch’oe Kyŏngch’ang was appointed as Case Reviewer (pukp’yŏngsa) of Hamgyŏng province, Yi Tal presented him with “Frontier Songs” 塞下曲 in three poems. One of them reads, 都尉分軍夜斫營漢家金鼓動邊城朝來更聽降胡說西下陰山有伏兵 When the commandant split the troops and struck the enemy camp,the golden drums from the Han court shook up the frontier. In the morning, he hears a surrendered Turkish soldier say,“To the west in the Yin Mountains, there is an ambush. For a time, the poem was widely recited (chŏnyŏng). I once read in a poem by the Tang poet Yu Gu 于鵠 (b. 747), there was a phrase, 度水逢胡說沙陰有伏兵 Crossing the river, I meet a Turkish soldier who says“To the north of the desert, there is an ambush.”Kwŏn Ŭngin’s poem “Traveling on Sea to a Human Abode” 遊海上人家 has a phrase, “Flying seagulls mistakenly enter the balustrade” 鷗飛誤入闌. Then I read in the Song poet He Yi’s 何異 (1129–1209) poem “Huancui Pavilion” 環翠閣, 沙禽占水閑相趁誤入疏簾靜卻回 Wading birds standing in water idly chase each other.Mistakenly entering the bamboo screen, quietly they return. In the past, Liu Chang 劉敞 (1019–1068; styled Yuanfu) poked fun at Ouyang Xiu and said, “Ouyang Xiu borrowed openly and secretly from Han Yu’s writings. What he openly borrowed can be roughly counted, but what he secretly borrowed cannot.” Kwŏn summarized two seven-character lines into one five-character line and only reiterated the original meaning (ŭi). His therefore can be called secret borrowing. But Yi Tal copied the entire phrases, just added a few words, and tried to impress the people of the time. His was not open borrowing but rather stealing with a grave looting skill.

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