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C028
From Poetry Talks
C028
Critique of 's Poem by
Featured in Jottings by Paegun (Compendium of Remarks on Poetry)
Poem Text
夫詩。以意爲主。設意最難。綴辭次之。意亦以氣爲主。由氣之優劣。乃有深淺耳。然氣本乎天。不可學得。故氣之劣者。以雕文爲工。未嘗以意爲先也。盖雕鏤其文。丹靑其句。信麗矣。然中無含蓄深厚之意。則初若可翫。至再嚼則味已窮矣。雖然。自先押韻。似若妨意。則改之可也。唯於和人之詩也。若有險韻。則先思韻之所安。然後措意也。句有難於對者。沈吟良久。不能易得。卽割棄不惜。宜也。方其構思。思若沈僻則陷。陷則着。着則迷。迷則有所執而不通也。惟其出入往來。變化自在。而達于圓熟也。或有以後句救前句之弊。以一字助一句之安。此不可不思也。
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